Experiment #233


At the heart of Christmas is a scandal. A virgin becoming pregnant, lowly shepherds visited by angels and tasked with proclaiming the king’s birth, a genealogy rife with sin and deeds unfit for a prince of heaven, God becoming man.

I did the design and Ben Jamison and I collaborated on the text.


Peer Review the Experiment

Tell the author how he did and how he could do better.
Be Honest. Be Specific. Be Constructive.