Experiment #4:43


Her alarm still goes off. She’s been gone ten months and the alarm still goes off. Every morning at 4:43am on the dot, even on weekends. I’ve tried shutting it off, unplugging it, putting it under pillows, taking it apart, throwing it off the balcony and mailing it to Greenland. But every morning it goes off. Every morning the bed is cold. Every morning I wake up alone.

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Tell the author how he did and how he could do better.
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